Q1 p. 38. Consider replacing the word, "arranging" with the word, "composing" Also, You somehow skipped from your introductory topic sentence, "....I want to do this for several reasons.." and moved immediately into, "....For example..." Don't forget "First of all, Second of all...and so on."
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Q1 p. 38. Consider replacing the word, "arranging" with the word, "composing" Also, You somehow skipped from your introductory topic sentence, "....I want to do this for several reasons.." and moved immediately into, "....For example..." Don't forget "First of all, Second of all...and so on."
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